I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Kobain I love how you made the text easy to read!I remember when I was watching a batman movie when I was eating pizza.Next time you blog you might be able to add a photo of yourself or put what is your fav superhero movie.Do you eat pizza when you watch superhero movies? From Keira
kia oar kobain its kauri here you might not no me but i go to kaingaroa school i like how you introduced your self good work maybe fix the bit were it say im good thank you bye now.
Kia ora Kobain,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.
Vicki
Kia ora Kobain I love how you made the text easy to read!I remember when I was watching a batman movie when I was eating pizza.Next time you blog you might be able to add a photo of yourself or put what is your fav superhero movie.Do you eat pizza when you watch superhero movies?
ReplyDeleteFrom Keira
kia oar kobain its kauri here you might not no me but i go to kaingaroa school i like how you introduced your self good work maybe fix the bit were it say im good thank you bye now.
ReplyDeleteKIA ora i'm Brazil its great your punctuation next time you should fix your writing and mine is pizza to .
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Crez and put a little more info about you
ReplyDeleteHI I'm ARII like this first post and you could put more info.
ReplyDeletehi jaspa here i like that introduced your self and that you like super heroes how bout me and you play on roblox super hero tycoon one day bye
ReplyDeleteKai ora kobain this is a very nice peace of writting but next time ad a walt,reflection but nice
ReplyDeletehi kobain
ReplyDeletei like this but why is there a line space at the end is looks a bit weird
but anther then that i like it.
hay did you like making this ?